It's always good to go back later and discover that what you worked out the previous day. . .1) is bad.
2) makes no sense.
3) doesn't conform with previous ideas.
4) doesn't conform with previous themes.
5) doesn't conform with previous themes because the story has no theme.
6) is bad.
that's how I learn.
I'll post this again with hopes of boosting the view count:
Why are festivals so expensive? I'm going to start my own. Who's with me?

